What does a forced proximity romance scene look like?
Example of a Forced Proximity Scene
Forced proximity does the heavy lifting that characters refuse to do themselves. A stuck elevator, a cramped closet, a broken-down car — the space shrinks until avoidance is physically impossible. This excerpt puts two people in a space too small for pretending.
The elevator stopped between the fourteenth and fifteenth floors with a shudder and a sound like a metal cough. The lights flickered. Stayed on. The doors stayed closed. "No," she said. "Don't panic." "I'm not panicking. I'm expressing displeasure." He pressed the emergency button. A tinny voice informed them that maintenance had been dispatched and could they please remain calm. "Remain calm," she repeated. "In a metal box. With you." "What's wrong with me?" "Nothing is wrong with you. That's the problem." He looked at her. She was pressing herself against the far wall — three feet away in a space designed for twelve people, currently holding two. Two people who had spent six weeks on the same project avoiding eye contact, sitting on opposite sides of conference tables, communicating through Slack when their desks were fifteen feet apart. "We should talk about this," he said. "There's nothing to talk about." "You just said the problem is that nothing is wrong with me." "I misspoke." "You never misspeak. You proofread your text messages." The elevator hummed around them. Somewhere above, machinery was doing something unhurried. She slid down the wall and sat on the floor. After a moment, he did the same. Their knees were almost touching. "The fundraiser," she said quietly. "When you put your hand on my back to guide me through the crowd. That's when it started." "For me it was the first day. You walked into the meeting with coffee in both hands and kicked the door open with your foot." She looked at him. "That was six weeks ago." "I know." "You've been acting normal for six weeks?" "I've been acting. Nothing about it was normal." The elevator jerked. Started moving again. Fifteenth floor. The doors opened to an empty hallway. Neither of them stood up.
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